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Interesting. :) I remember the sequence where Aayla Secura dies in the movie. I like how you explained a little more about it before she was killed. Should I re-write ...

Everyone already said everything I could think of *pout*. I like your style, it's enjoyable and easy to read. I was always bothered by the fact that just because the ...

Every once in a while there is a story on YWS that is better than most books I've read. This is one of them. I don't have any nitpicks or ...

Whatever your plot is. It's incredible. I. Must. Read. More. :D

Ha ha! :smt005 That's funny! Not the best peice ever written but hey, who cares?

Ooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!! :smt005 Well that makes sense! Thanks!

Not quite sure what to put. I really liked it. Your description was good, but now I'm confused. JB turned to look at Gage. “He’s completely undisciplined. He let his ...

I didn't read the first draft either. I found this very captivating. I'm going to go read the rest now. :)

Beautiful. The lighting is great. That's all I can think of to say for now, sorry.

Your ability to show ordinary things from another point of view is amazing! That's all I can say. :D

I love the depth to the second picture. The dark leaves in front of the pink blossom things just looks cool. I wish I could take pictures that pretty . ...

So cute! I love kittys. Your dresser is pretty too. :lol:

Neat. I love stories from the animal's point of view. I hope you're planning to write more! :D

This looks like it will be interesting. I kind of always wondered what it would be like for a Jedi during "execute order sixty six" I'm not a grammar expert ...

I love your writing style. For some reason, I find kidnappings interesting. And this is very interesting. Please write more soon! :D